Khadijah El-Amin
Professor Lauren Rinke
Writing 150
October 12, 2012
Literacy
Narrative Process Memo
As
I sat down in class to begin my timeline, the most logical place for me to
start was age one. At that age I was in the beginning stage of becoming
literate. Remembering the small details was not hard in my case because at that
age it’s the basic age and the beginning age of your life. Not much detail for
just one year in the life stage. I just know that I began to pick up simple
words and knew what certain things were. My parents made it their job to help
me become literate. One thing I found interesting about my literacy development
in my timeline was actually seeing that over time I really improved and
progressed in my reading and writing. I never knew this until actually writing
it out and seeing my progression. The theme throughout my timeline was reading
and focusing on the books that made me like reading even more; which was
reading Junie B. Jones books.
Deciding
which area to focus on was not hard at all. Reading was my passion growing up.
I already knew what to write about automatically. The experience of creating a
timeline made me realize that as growing up I grasped things very quickly
compared to others my age. I’m a very determined person when it comes to
improving on any weak areas and I take that with me to become better than the
day before.
Narrowing
down to an area of focus for my written narrative was very simple. Reading was
what I like to do best. Ideas that jumped out at me were the small details from
my childhood in which helped me become a better reader. When I began to write
my narrative I organized it by age in my timeline in which I created. While
writing, everything flowed quite easily. I didn’t use any prewriting strategies;
the timeline had helped me enough. After composing my rough draft the only
thing I changed was adding more details. My partner helped me fix that, there
was a lot of room for more details to make my narrative more inviting. This
helped me a lot because this is where I struggle in writing and I always
overlook it, but in this case I changed it, which made it better.
When
I made the final edits to my narrative I had no clue to how I was going to turn
my narrative story into a video slideshow. The way I would normally write a
story is to just briefly describe as many details as possible. When making a
video slideshow you have to edit and pick out the most important details, which
can be quite challenging in my opinion.
My
peer review partner chose only eight of my sentences because of the short time
limit we had in class. I chose all of them for my slideshow. All the sentences
that my peer review partner chose where very good sentences because they were
the main concepts. I did find it difficult to edit my text down for a
52-character limit. I wanted to add more information but couldn’t. My strategy
was highlighting the best details only that I wanted to share. The images I
used was a good way to buffer between my text slides. It gave me the
opportunity to add more information, despite the small text limitations.
Choosing
the images was very easy. They were images of things I like that has to do with
reading. All were personal and from the web, they helped tell my story clearly.
Choosing a song was very random; I used one from the website which went well
with my overall them. It communicates with my literacy by me being a very determent
person. The only thing I wish I could have done differently was to use more of
my own personal photos.
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